Wednesday 21 May 2014

Thursday 15 May 2014

Devon intermediate

me and room 10,11,8 went to Devon intermediate
because we were going to explore what it is like at intermediate.  I made two tags and I pot cuc km on them.  







Tuesday 13 May 2014

Monday 12 May 2014

basket ball

on Monday me and my team played basket ball.  we got thrashed 40  2.  we had fun

Wednesday 7 May 2014

How To Make A Quality Comment


Writing a Quality Blog Comment
We are learning to write quality blog comments.


Choose your top three tips from the video and list below.
Highlight each line and replace with your text.

  1. complments
  2. new facts
  3. start a conversation                        

Take a look at this poster here: Writing Great Commets on Blogs

What are the main points of this, add a point to each number below:

1. keep it short but good writing

2.make sure it has punctuation and good spelling.

3.be posative and tell them what was good about there writing



Let's look at some comments on Manaiakalani blogs.

What do you notice about the comments?
Do they have anything in common?

Share your thinking with a friend.
Visit our class blog on a class mates blog and read two or three recent posts.
Select one post and leave a comment
Remember to triple T your post plus spell check before you post
Proof read your comment - capital letters, punctuation, spelling, does it make sense?

Make sure you are logged into your Google Apps Account.

Publish your comment.


Take a screenshot of your comment and insert it here:


Compare your comment to our Quality Comment: Success Criteria

  • How is your comment positive, thoughtful or helpful?




  • How could you improve your comment?








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