Movenote Play

the gravel writting

Hi my name is ethan I am in room 10 at frankley school. if you didn't know there is some gravel on the forecourt.they  put the gravel down in term 3 holaday. they put the gravel down on a mistake  

The gravel is a uneven ground so it is easy to trip on it.

When you trip on the uneven ground you grease your knee. Then you can get a infected knee.It is easy to roll your ankle.It’s really annoying when you hurt yourself.

my kite

My kite

hay mum,dad and mr A today I am going  to talk to you about my kite .I am going to talk about what matters I used why I used those matters and what design I used and why I used that design.

I chose my design I did not want to copy someone else design.  I chose a triangle because it is aerodynamics .  I got the idea from my big brother phoenix.  I think it was a good idea because it’s lit and it dries fast.

I chose my matters because I what it is be lite . I chose garden stats because it is lite .I chose nylon because it is strong.  I chose nylon fabric because it dries fast.

I made a decision to persist to sow my kite.  I persist when my brother  was playing on his computer and when I was supposed to be on the computer.  I wanted to in prest my self and mr A because I want to be finished in time  

The Zone of Confusion

hay Mum and Dad.  Today I am go to tell you what the zone of confusion means.  

The zone of confusion is a frustrating furious place to be.  You don't want to be in the zone of confusion because it is the worst place you want to be.

When I get in the zone of confusion I try to get out of it.  But if  I can't get out of the zone of  confusion I some time sit there.  try and get out of the zone of confusion but the other time when I am not sitting there I Ask for help.

six sentecns

                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Once upon a time there was a mad and crazy scientist.  He lived in a hose in a spooky and deserted  forest.  He made his rear potions and tested them out on himself.  He drank a potion and then he turned into a frog.  He really did not feel that wall so he went in to bed.  So he said to himself I will make another potion and he did and he drank it and he turned back into a scientist.

I was in pan I don’t care anymore.  My fist shaped up like a ball of paper of rubbish.  my brother was laughing  like a clown.  I felt like an iceberg.

soccer tournament

On Saturday my team and I play a soccer tournament. We played three games we draw one and lost one and won  the scores where three one             three nil        three all.           And I all most got a goal and we i did't get the goal because it went to high came third out of are pool